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to show that thing can go your way even if they usually don't.
Thomas never liked running he never really liked anything that was exercise related. It was only his second lap out of the five he had to do but he was already tired. Thomas wasn’t fat he actually didn’t seem to be in that bad shape. His hair swung back and forth as he mad his way along the track he hated gym but he had to take it. Thomas went in to the change room at the end of gym which was his first period class which made it so much better because he got to be tired all day. Thomas had no luck with the opposite sex so the nod he gave to the attractive blonde he passed in the hall wasn’t noticed. Thomas did have something though that set him apart from other people and made him I guess you would say special. He had a photographic memory like no other if he saw or hear something he could remember it forever.
Thomas went to his locker and got his books for the next class. When he got there he saw that the very attractive girl who had the locker beside him was there. He thought that it was a good time to try and talk to her again. The first time he hardly got a word out he kind of made a high pitched sound at her that was supposed to be a hello my names Thomas I think you are beautiful and should go out with me because not only would it be awesome for me but would better your life swell but it more came of as a I hope I didn’t just pee my pants sound.
The girl was standing there trying to remember her locker combination. Thomas walked over and opened up his locker looked over and for a brief moment thought he had the courage to saw a word to this girl but as fast as it had come it was gone and he looked back at his locker as fast as he could. He got his stuff and she still hadn’t opened her locker. She had trouble opening it before she actually used to say it out loud for the longest time he could remember every day in the morning 33 44 55. At that moment he turned to her aging and said 33 44 55, puzzled the girl put in the combination and the lock opened up. She gave a sigh of relief and thanks him and asked how he knew her combo. Tomas thinking to him self don’t blow it don’t blow it said that he remembered it from when she use to say it out loud. The girl smiled and said that she might just need him to come back at lunch and remind her and that they could go get something to eat. She turned around and left at that moment Thomas felt over joyed finally he had some luck with a girl and not just any girl one that was as attractive as the one that had the locker beside him, he realized as well that he’d have to learn her name as well.
1 comment:
These are three very interesting, well-written, poetic at times pieces. The problem is, that they include details that could not possibly be known from simple observation which is what this assignment called for.
For example: "Thomas never liked running he never really liked anything that was exercise related."
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