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Saturday, September 18, 2010

cue three

She slammed the door, screaming at the top of her lungs, "You have GOT to be kidding me!"
She couldn’t believe that after all her time spent running they had finally found her and for the first time she didn’t have a way to get out of the mess she found her self in. all she had to do now was keep calm while she thought of a plan and then she would make it out like she had from every other time something bad happened.

She looked around the dark room she had just entered to hide her self from the three men who were sent by those she had been running from for what seemed to be her whole life. She started to panic because never had they been this close to her. She always saw them coming for a mile and was able to get away before they even found out where she had been. This time was different they had crept up on her and she had no Idea that they were even close. Was she getting tired is that why she made the mistake that could cost her everything, she kept going through reason like that as to why they had found her.

After a few moments of standing in the dark room she decided that she would just try and get away and worry about the plan later, getting out of this place and farther away was a better idea then staying where they knew she was. She cracked open the door just enough so she could see out of it. The coast was clear no was around. She took a deep breath and then walked out in to the street. She only had little time before they would come back and search the area more carefully.

She pulled her hood over her head and started to walk as fast as she could down the empty street. She knew that in just a couple blocks she could make it to the train station and be out of the city, but she didn’t know where those looking for her where or who was working for them. She couldn’t think of that now first step getting to the train station and trying to get a train out of the city. Anywhere would be good just as long as she could get away. She was walking so fast now she was almost running down the street which started to become more crowed as she got closer to the train station. It was with in sight now her hart skipped a beat she had almost escaped again. As she walked up to the counter to buy her ticket she herd a voice from behind and her stomach dropped as she herd the voice say, “ you didn’t think we would just let you leave her, now did you.”

3 comments:

Lola ♣ Xie said...

The setting is very ominous and very realistic, but it would be nice to know the name of the group going after her since it gives the feeling that she's a fugitive or an ex gang member or even some kind of government experiment. Other then that, good story.

Ms.C said...

Very emotive stories with a definite writing style. Edit the pieces because there are a lot of homophone errors.

ivana said...

I found it very mysterious and the story really grabs the readers' attention. There's just a few run-on sentences but overall, it's awesome.